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HEY GUYS. DIS IS THE NEW STORY. READY AND COMPLETED. FEEDBACK PLZ.

Cast:
COURTNEY - 14 (Rachele's best friend/Rena's lil sis)
RENA - 15 (Courtney's big sister)
RACHELE - 14 (Courtney's best friend)
CHRIS BROWN - 16 (Dwayne's homeboy)
DWAYNE - 16
KRISTEN - 15
HANK - 17

HERE'S WHAT THE CAST LOOKS LIKE (click da names)
COURTNEY & RENA
RACHELE
CHRIS BROWN
DWAYNE
KRISTEN
HANK

Ok. This is a story about this girl who moved to a new school and state and is now trying to make friends.
RUN IT OR DUMP IT?

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RUN IT

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it sounds gudd. write sumthin so i can know like more of da plot plz.

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yeah i want to know 2

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run it

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INTRODUCTION
Courtney just transferred from St.Ursula's private school to her older sister's public school Great Oak High. She quickly makes friends with a girl named Rachele. Courtney's goals in life are to make it big in the music industry. Then Chris Brown comes along!

CHAPTER 2
In homeroom that morning
The homeroom teacher Ms. Lynch rapped the class to attention:
Ms. Lynch: Good morning students. Today we have a new student with us. Her name is Courtney Wilkinson and she's joinin us from St.Ursula's.
Courtney: Hi
Ms. Lynch: Why don't u tell us more about yourself?
Courtney: Ok. I'm 15. I used to live in Barbados. I like to listen to music, play sports and surf the Net.
Ms.Lynch: Ok. Thank you for sharing that with us. *Starts to call out the register*
Ms.Lynch: Chris Brown?
Chris: Here
Ms. Lynch: Kristen Deane?
Kristen: Here
Ms. Lynch: Trey Foster, Sally Farley, Mario Porter...
Ms.Lynch: Chris, may you show Courtney around for the day?
Chris: Ok mam. *Slips into the empty seat next to Courtney*Looks at her and smiles*
Courtney: Hi. I'm Courtney
Chris: Dang shorty...u real pretty. By the way i'm Chris. Your parents sure knew what they were doin!
Courtney: *laughs*I guess i shud say thank you for the compliment.


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CHAPTER 3
First bell rings
Chris: What class do u have now?
Courtney: Biology
Chris: Ok. Let's start walking since the Physics lab is around that way.
Courtney: Ok. Let me go and get my books from my locker first.
Her locker happens to end up next to Chris's locker!
After Chris walks Courtney to class and leaves her at the door this girl Brandy walks up to her.
Brandy: Wha u doin walkin round with my man?!
Courtney: Huh? Hi. I'm Courtney
Brandy: I kno who you are -----! You still ain't answer my question! Wha you doin walkin round with man?
Courtney: U mean chris?! *starts to laugh*
Brandy: What's so funny?
Courtney: Me n Chris are only friends. We barely know each other. Ms. Lynch told him to show me around the school since i'm new. Oh and by the way...I think you need a Tic Tac
Brandy: Wateva. But you betta don't try anythin with Chris. *givin her the evil look*

CHAPTER 4
Lunchtime
Courtney is sitting down at the table with Rena, Rachele and Chrystal.
Chris walks over to the table
Chris: Hey beautiful. *lookin at Courtney*
Courtney: Hey Chris. This is my sister Rena, my friend Rachele and my sister's friend Chrystal.
Chris: Hey. *returning to Courtney* I'll talk to you later after lunch. Maybe we could....
Hank+Kristen+Dwayne: Chris, come along!
Chris: Aight. I comin. I'll see you later Courtney. *winks and walks along*
Rena+Rachele+Chrystal: Girl! U kno what who that is!!?
Courtney: Yea. That's Chris. He's in my homeroom class.
The girls: That's not only Chris. That's the famous Chris Brown and his homies Kristen, Dawyne and Hank!
Rachele: Everygirl in the school would die just talking to him! Lucky for Brandy
Courtney: Brandy! U kno her?
Rachele: yea , why?
Courtney: *relates what happened earlier dat morning*
Meanwhile at the boys table
Dwayne: Hey Chris. I see you don't waste any time in pickin up the honeys but i gotta admit that girl is a cutie
The guys: *agreeing with Dwayne*
Chris: Yea. i gotta get a piece of that!
Hank: Wait. I thought you had Brandy!
Chris: I do but we sorta rocky right now. Plus, look at that girl Courtney. Please tell me you wouldn't want a piece of that! Don't be a playa hater

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CHAPTER 5
Courtney's walkin down the hall heading to History
Chris: Hey Courtney. Hold up!
Courtney: *stopping to wait on Chris*
Brandy: *steps in front of Chris before he could pass*
Brandy: Why you walkin with that b*tch? Why you don't answer my calls?
Chris: Could you move? I'm already late for history.
Brandy: I'm tired of your bullsh*t. Take all your sh*t and f*ck out. We're over. *marches down the hall angrily*
Chris: Thank God

CHAPTER 6
Ms. Shepherd: Chris! You're late again as usual for History
Chris: Sorry mam
Ms. Shepherd: We are workin in groups of two to do a project on World War II. I am going to choose the groups
Class: *groans loudly*
Ms. Shepherd: Kristen and Rachele, Mark and Tanya, Hank and Claire, Chris and Courtney,...
Ms. Shepherd: Get together quietly and decide what you're doing.
Chris: *turns to Courtney* Guess we're together again
Courtney: Yea. I guess
Chris: You wanna meet up somewhere and do the project?
Courtney: Ok. Meet me at my house about 3:30. Here's my address...
Chris: *cutting off* I'll find your house
Courtney: But...how?
Chris: I have my ways. lol

WHAT WILL HAPPEN AT COURTNEY'S HOUSE LATER? BUMP FOR MORE
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oooo well I wonder..how do you just "find" somebody's house lol. Anyway, it's real good gurl. RUN IT!

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RUN IT, oooooooooooooooo going to the house gurl gonna have some trouble believe i know LOL

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run it...i like it so far

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Gurl come on the pain is killing me i need to know if they doing that "nite thang"

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shay_lizze_ADMIN wrote:

Gurl come on the pain is killing me i need to know if they doing that "nite thang"



LOL i wanna be the gurl doin the "night thang" with chris

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i want chris to... lol NVM

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shay_lizze_ADMIN wrote:

i want chris to... lol NVM



yeah u betta say nvm LOL

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SHUT UP LOL

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is she ever! gonna continue!? it's good

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i hope so i hope she didnt 4get about us

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i like ya story but r u eva gonna finish????? but its good!! i like it!

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i like the story run it gurl new reader! by the w ay how do u go to the next page

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